After I had sent what I had written so far for my dissertation, Simon offered to have a meeting about my work. I took this opportunity to do a voice recording of the meeting and later used that to be transcribed into a written document, this was used as a development tool. Below is what was said during the meeting. I have highlighted different sections to make it easier for me to understand. Yellow: feedback about what I have done Blue: information/ sources to consider adding into the dissertation Purple: how I could frame/ redirect my dissertation for the better Green: possible new dissertation question if I was to follow his feedback Dr Simon Bells 1-2-1 feedback: · Why are you doing literature review? It doesn’t say that you have to do that in the brief. Don’t call it a literature review when it is technically not that · This is well researched and comm...